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Covering letter - need help - out of ideas
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I'd drop the 'high-speed' phrase, the ad just wants someone for routine stuff, mentioning high-speed could make the recruiter think he's some sort of speedfreak &  be likely to thrash their vehicles around the place!  Replace it with something more positive sounding like 'driving emergency-response ambulances & ensuring they were always kept  clean & in a constant state of mission readiness' that also covers the final point of the ad.
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Re: Covering letter - need help - out of ideas - by Pat - 17-04-12, 09:31 AM

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