Being lazy and leaving it to to others I feel its not my place to comment----------- but I will, i think the union flag in the background either needs to be droped from the design or it needs to be seen more as it just looks like some stripes around the edge.
I don't do rain or threat there of. dry rider only with no shame.
I actually quite liked the background and the way it was done. My only real comment was to try and make the font a little larger maybe (I agree with dropping "Yamaha")
It needs to be instantly recognised and easily read
(17-01-14, 02:40 PM)mickvp link Wrote: Version 2.0?
Happy to change the british flag for the English/Scottish/Welsh/Irish etc. I would prefer it with the Saltire anyway :p
I like this one, I think the design needs to be recognisible from a distance and this design would be a distinctive blue spot from a fair distance. (this chimes in with the blue spot on the calipers -sort of).
The tune forks are looking great now I see also bigger stronger words.
Could we have somhow fazer as the bike decals.
I still worry about the flag I dont think there enough of it seen to tell what it is - yes it is also faded in the background but to bring it out more would obscure the words.
What about bringing the words closer to the folks logo and loosing the inner black outline and have the flag vignet form colours to white where the words will be
I don't do rain or threat there of. dry rider only with no shame.
(17-01-14, 06:13 PM)fazersharp link Wrote: The tune forks are looking great now I see also bigger stronger words.
Could we have somhow fazer as the bike decals.
I still worry about the flag I dont think there enough of it seen to tell what it is - yes it is also faded in the background but to bring it out more would obscure the words.
What about bringing the words closer to the folks logo and loosing the inner black outline and have the flag vignet form colours to white where the words will be
Im not sure what you mean when you say Fazer as bike decals?
Re: changing the flag - Its one of those things that you wont know for sure if it works or not till its physically printed out (I can print them all out on Monday to check if there is colour bleed etc). My feeling is it will be fine the way it is, Personally I think you can tellthat its a flag at the back, and i like the outlines as it helps draw your eye. without the inner black line the writing would look like it didnt belong there IMO. happy to change things to suit the majority though of course :Thumbsup
(17-01-14, 07:09 PM)fazersharp link Wrote: I much prefer the look of the seperate flags, but I think the England one may be better straight and without the wavy
Would the centre blue work better with green for welsh and red for england as I like the look of the scotish one with the blue flag and blue centre
Yes, I take your point about the England flag, you might be right with that - ill change that over the next day or so.
That could be a fair point about the Yamaha Logo as well. Im not sure how I could get it to look, or if it would work though (Especially the welsh one!), just as Ive never seen a green Yamaha logo - red should be fine. Ill try it anyway and see what its like
17-01-14, 09:11 PM (This post was last modified: 17-01-14, 09:16 PM by fazersharp.)
Dont laugh !!
Mine here is just flat without the highlights on yours and I cant do the rounded letters but this is what I was trying to say about the vignet flag.
Yes mine is crap but do you see what I was trying to say
Perhaps you could mickvp --- it up as mine looks like a child has done it
I don't do rain or threat there of. dry rider only with no shame.